Not still enough at point of release, and you have a horrible trigger movement with your back foot moving to the leg side and throwing your balance out, which means that your head goes outside the line of the ball and your front foot points to mid on to compensate. When the ball is inswinging, its bowling you because you're in absolutely no position to play the ball. The good shots are the ones where you get well forward, and head stays low with hands thrown through the ball!
Most important bit of coaching from me would be to stay still as long as possible, before dipping your head and leading with your shoulder to get a huge stride forward and throw your hands through the ball. THis should, make your foot go in the right place, and play the ball under your eyes.
Finally, get the feeder to slow the feeding down. Give yourself time to settle and rest a bit over the front foot.
I also fully agree with Dave that there is something about it, definitely some talent in there. Not seen many people look that good while at the same time not