toenails ....
watch the video very very carefully upto 1 minute
take a look at your hands when you lift the bat back. its like you leave go with your top hand and then rotate the hand towards yourself meaning your v is towards the inside edge ........ unfortunately this means that you can not drive the ball properly as you have to drop your elbow and then pat the ball with your hands and a bend wrist.
Try to line up your v's towards the outside edge between splice and outside edge.
stop the video on 19 seconds for a perfect example ... will need the full HD to see it clearly though.
I think if you sort this out you will be a very very different and much improved batsman as you seem to have the right idea at what shots to play.
Im going to record a few videos of grip, back lift and basic swinging of the bat and also so very controversial thoughts on how you should bat.
none of this 100% side on or even weight distribution of weight on your feet in your stance ..... so it may seem very strange and a big no no to some.
Best way is probably to set up a free blog and then post up the writings here.