Seeing as I have been tagged twice!
This is what I suggested to
@king pair earlier via pm
great to see someone who looks a decent player.
My thoughts/tips are threefold.
1. Stance:
You are very side on, which isn't bad, but you may be more comfortable opening up just a little but. This will benefit you knowing what to leave outside the off side, it may also make you less ridged.
2. Back lift:
Your backlift is tucking your bat behind you a little, this stops your bat coming through straight on occasion. Try to push your bat back towards the off stump rather than leg stump.
Opening your stance may help with this too.
3: Back foot:
When you play your attacking shots your back foot goes for a bit of a walk. I did a kitchen coaching session on that. Your timing will improve if you can hold your shape better.
Fact is you look still and calm at the crease and can clearly hold a bat, by slightly opening your stance (feet at 11 or 11:30 if that makes sense!) it will help relax you and I think free you up a bit.