Where do you take your guard? May just be the angle of the camera but at times it almost looks like you're taking guard outside leg stump. Other times it looks a bit more traditional.Sneaking suspicion that if your guard is moving around a lot you might find it harder to judge the line of the ball than you need to.
What does your top hand do?
Don’t mean to be rude but looks a bit pointless. Looks like you’ve just gone to hit the ball without really having a focus or something to work on. I’d be surprised if you actually bat like that in a match!
In what sense?
It looks to me that your top hand doesn’t do anything at all