Looks like a good effort, personally i would have finished it a little lower that you have to give more support to the shoulder, I'm guessing you ran out of string?
No mate I didnt run out of string (at the bottom anyway!), this was deliberate. As JB said I started at the bottom when I did it.
I have OCD about the way the bottom of my grip sits, and it's much nice over just binding than a second grip.
The additional binding was to replace a second half grip rather that strengthen. So j marked where the extra half grip had been sat and put the binding there. The grip sits nicely and is easy to tape to the bat still so all in all I'm happy with my first effort.
Will take into account the added strength round the shoulder if/when I do my next one though mate