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[arsenal123]

Exactly as above.  Everyone can dissect anyones technique to some degree, simplify things.  Get leaning into that ball when you drive.  A difficult task when the bowling is quicker than comfortable. 

Imagine getting your head right over that front knee when you drive throughout the whole shot, quite often people think they're getting forward but pull their body up at the final moment.

[abdulwq]

I am in no means an expert so dont take it very seroius.
The most thing you are lacking is bending, leaning and bringing the fornt foot in line of the ball.
I also see you are way outside leg stump and then you shuffle before ball is delivered and couple of times you get yourself locked up when the ball is on your pads resulting in offbalance.
You seem to look like a guy who wants to stand and deliver and always looking for a short pitched ball.
The worst thing i figure is you are bending your knees and not bending your back accordingly might hurt your back a little.(I know some of the taller guys have kind of this habit.)
MY advice would be  to work on playing in line with the ball with min gap between bat and pads, your stance needs to be overhauled according to Ramprakash video and solid up your base.
Also i would like to criticize that playing n bowling machine wont show us your whole technique so better have a video with some bowlers bowling you so guys can have alook at the whole range of shots you have.
Pros can correct me where i am wrong:)